Your first 8-bar melody
· First ideas · Level 2 · 20 min
You now have all the tools you need to write your first real melody: a motif, repetition and variation, question and answer. In this lesson we will put them together step by step, like a craftsman following a plan. By the end you will have an eight-bar melody in C major, with a left hand, that you can play and share.
Step 1: choose a character
Before writing a single note, decide what you want to express. A tender waltz? A cheerful march? A lullaby? That choice guides the time signature and the tempo:
| Character | Time signature | Tempo |
|---|---|---|
| Waltz, swaying | 3/4 | 100–140 |
| March, energy | 4/4 or 2/4 | 100–120 |
| Lullaby, dreaming | 3/4 or 6/8 | 60–80 |
| Calm song | 4/4 | 70–90 |
For our example we choose a little waltz in 3/4.
Step 2: the plan of the period
Before writing, draw up a plan. It is the secret of melodies that "stand up":
| Bars | Role | Ends on |
|---|---|---|
| 1–2 | the motif | — |
| 3–4 | rest of the question | B or D (half cadence) |
| 5–6 | the motif returns, then climbs to the peak | — |
| 7–8 | descent and conclusion | C (perfect cadence) |
Step 3: write the melody
Here is the result. Listen while following the plan above.
M:3/4 L:1/4 Q:1/4=120 K:C "C"E2 G | "G7"F2 D | "C"E G c | "G"B3 | "C"E2 G | "Dm"d2 A | "G7"G F D | "C"C3 |]
Look at how it is built:
- Bars 1–2: the motif (a minim, a crotchet) rises from E to G, then answers itself one floor lower, F–D.
- Bars 3–4: the melody soars up to high C and falls back onto B, a long open note: the end of the question.
- Bars 5–6: the motif returns (the listener recognises it), then climbs to high D, the highest note of the melody, heard only once: this is the peak.
- Bars 7–8: a descent G–F–D over G7, then the final C. The end.
Step 4: add a left hand
For now, one low note per bar is enough, held for the whole bar. It provides the harmonic foundation. The chord symbols (C, G7, Dm = D minor) tell you which note to choose: the root of the chord.
M:3/4
L:1/4
Q:1/4=120
K:C
%%staves {RH LH}
V:RH clef=treble
V:LH clef=bass
[V:RH] "C"E2 G | "G7"F2 D | "C"E G c | "G"B3 | "C"E2 G | "Dm"d2 A | "G7"G F D | "C"C3 |]
[V:LH] C,3 | G,,3 | C,3 | G,,3 | C,3 | D,3 | G,,3 | C,3 |]
In the accompaniment chapter you will learn to turn these held notes into a real waltz bass ("oom-pah-pah").
Step 5: run the checklist
- The range (from lowest to highest note) is no more than about a tenth.
- The peak is heard only once, preferably in the second half.
- Most of the motion is stepwise; leaps are followed by a step back in the other direction.
- The rhythm of the motif comes back at least twice.
- Bar 4: open ending. Bar 8: ending on C.
- Writing bar by bar without a plan: the melody wanders and doesn't know where it is going. The plan in step 2 avoids that trap.
- Several equal peaks: if you climb to the same high D three times, there is no climax any more.
- A different rhythm in every bar: without a recurring rhythm there is no unity.
- Forgetting to breathe: plan long notes in bars 4 and 8, like a singer taking a breath.
Your workshop
- Choose a character, a time signature and a tempo (table in step 1). Write them at the top of your sketchbook page.
- Copy the plan from step 2 and fill it in: which motif? which note for the half cadence? where will the peak be?
- Write your eight-bar melody in C major in the piano roll, using your motif from the previous lessons.
- Add a left hand with one note per bar: C, F or G (and possibly D or A), depending on the melody notes.
- Go through the checklist in step 5 and fix whatever doesn't work.
- Copy your melody into the ABC editor and give it a title. Congratulations: you have composed your first piece!
Self-check: play your melody twice in a row. The repeat should feel natural and the ending truly conclusive.
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